Well, I'm not a big fan of House music, and neither kow too much about it, but I'll try to analyze this song.
So, I would say that the first part is rather too long and repetitive, and it doesn't build-up for the stronger part that comes after, the latter just starts suddenly. And talking about it, the mastering was a bit low quality there, the sounds overlay each other and it becomes a bit of a mess.
Then the calmer part repeats, the same problems with overlaying happen there, but it is less noticeble for being "less noisy", but a trained ear can catch it. Then the same strong part again, same problems. I feel like it was a bit disapointing that half of the song is just the same as the other half.
And finally, after 2:30 it looks like it is a completely different song. All of a sudden it becomes a different beat even with different chords. The change is not smooth, it sounds weird and breaks the feel of the song.
Overall, my feedback TO YOU is that you need to get better at your mastering and your transitions.